The Official Writing Challenge
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She was firm but still respecful and polite. I like that. There are a few minor grammatical things in here, but not much. Good story!
I really enjoyed reading this and felt like cheering Tami for her articulate stand and her shining faith. Well written.
The girl's passion comes across loud and clear. It's a shame she didn't present any cogent counter-arguments to try and make the teacher rethink his own position. But it's good when God's people will make a stand
My son did something similar on his Bio Regents ( NYS test you have to pass to get diploma) he wrote in capital letters THEORY explained that atheory was an idea and not a fact. The horrible thing about all this is Darwin never meant it as a way to get away from the Bible but somehow over the years his idea did just that.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall!
I loved this on every level. It packed a punch and was right on topic. Congratulations!