The Official Writing Challenge
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Poetry isn't normally my "thing" and I tend to skim over the poems in the Challenge. But this - this caught and held my attention. I like the uneven cadence and the rythm, as well as the message. Very good!
Powerful poem, great word pictures. The style and cadence seemed to magnify each image.
Well done.
Wow this was a powerful piece.
Wow. This is amazing. Incredible.
Excellent. I walked beside you throughout th poem. I loved the structure and the used of repeated phrases. Really rally good!
This was powerful! I LOVED how you referred to LINCOLN and KING. I picked up on that right away.

This should be a winner!
This is good. I sensed the tension of bondage at the beginning and felt the relief of freedom at the end. I picked up on the shadow of "Lincoln" and "King" as well. Great job!
What an interesting style! I was pulled along and at first I thought he was going to get mugged or something, but this was better.
Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! I knew I wouldn't be disappointed! LOVED it! Man! This was soooo goooood! Great job Bill!