The Official Writing Challenge
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09/06/10
I liked your title and you had a great sense of progression as the story unfolded
Wow god is quite good at getting His point across! I really enjoyed this, I even found myself guessing. But I wouldn't have won. This was a fun read.
09/07/10
Love the message in the seemingly mundane. Well done.
Congratulations for placing in the top 40 overall.