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A gripping account of a story that is not as well known as most Bible stories. You captured her feelings well. I felt for her.
I'm not super familiar with this particular story but you did piqué my interest. Well done.
A very well told story, though personally I think there was justice in their deaths. In Joshua 9 a vow was made to protect the Gibeonites, and Saul incurred God's just wrath by disobeying it.

Still, I have no doubt that your MC would have found it senseless, and that it is a very brutal compared to anything Jesus would do among us today. Great job, and thank you for a good read.
This one caught my interest. I read the referenced scripture passage. Then, I remembered the account of when the treaty was made between Joshua and the Gibeonites in Joshua 9. You know it's good writing when it stirs your readers to check out the scripture I enjoyed this.
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