The Official Writing Challenge
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08/26/10
Thanks for the biology lesson. The dialogue was fine, but I felt I needed some tags. It was a long slice of dialogue and I lost track of who was saying what.
08/31/10
Informative.
The unit on the left side of a colon must be a complete clause, so some puntuation corrections needed.
I love stories showing the relationships between father/son.

Mona
This was a fun read. Not only do I adore the name Xander, but I snorted with laughter several times. You have a nice sense of humor.