The Official Writing Challenge
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I don't know how those branches work, but I know they do when put in the right hands. I liked the easy flow of this story and the pictures you painted in my mind.
Lovely descriptions. I felt like I was right there.
This took me back to the Little House on the Prairie days. I loved reading her books and your story was just as delightful. I think it's wonderful when an author can take the reader back to a time when neither one was born, but describe it so wonderfully, I feel like I am there.
I am in awe of the atmosphere of this piece. Superbly written; feels like a page from a great novel.
Congratulations for placing in the top 30 overall.