The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the swaying motion from darkness to light. Well done, a message my eyes needed to see right now.
08/02/10
Yes, come Lord Jesus come!
08/02/10
Amazing. Beautiful language. Wonderful message.
I was so enticed to keep reading with your trailing words after each stanza. I couldn't wait to see what came next! :) Your choice of words made your poem feel like it was "moving" (if that makes sense).