The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, much too often, I'm Resi and not Redi.
What a totally fresh and catchy story you weave here.
Just wonderful.

Wow! I love this entry, especially the descriptions of the paint brush - you made him positively come to life:) Awesome analogy and I love the picture you painted with words for us.
The touch of the Master's Hand - wonderfully told.
This is such a brilliant idea. I loved the analogy so much. Well done.
I kept trying to guess what the artist was painting. I love that it was a cross. This is a wonderfully fresh idea. I like the change of name at the end too. Nice touch of symbolism
This is brilliant - what a wonderful parable picture. Huge lessons here. Fantastic.
Oh how very, very delightful! This was adorable, creative and SO fun. When I didn't chuckle, I was smiling.
A creative take on the topic. I had guessed what the picture was about.
Amazing. I love the way you used the prompt and created such wonderful characters. Great!
This was fun to read and was painted with great messages from start to finish. Illustrated, this would make a great children's book.
Very creative POV! Out of the box and fun, with a great lesson!
What a wonderfully creative idea you had--personify paint brushes and tell a story through them. Great message.
Wonderful, beautiful storytelling right from the get-go. I love this one!
I like your unique approach to the topic. The analogy was spot on. I enjoyed Resi's pov; could certainly see myself on many occasions in my life. Trust, Redi...Trust, Lollie. Great message.
Thoroughly enjoyed this!
Congrats on winning with this very worthy piece!

Love this Kellie! You are amazingly creative! Proud of your work and your efforts!
This is an amazing piece of writing. I enjoyed reading it. Congrats.
Unique, profound, refreshing, yet convicting with only 750 words. Congratulations on possessing such an anointed talent.