The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent work on this difficult poetic form. Your descriptions of the desert are perfect. I love your title, and these favorite lines, "Streams in the desert fed from on high -- You can drink from them copiously—"
I love the picture in my head of Jesus shouting out those words to the crowds. Great thoughts-great poem!
Oh how I love the promises revealed in your beautiful poem.
I have always loved the image of Jesus as living water. You have done a wonderful job of expressing this.