The Official Writing Challenge
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An enjoyable story. Good work.
I like your descriptions of the old store but came up surprised when the MC thought that it would be inherited to her. That was a big jump, I believe, but I like the twist in the plot. Smart man to give her the books. Keeps everyone happy. Good story.
This is a great read. I liked how you took me on a roller coaster ride of ups and downs. I felt like I was really there.
Very good story, and the prologue to a wonderful book, I think. Well written; very evocative: full of sights and scents and emotions.
Loved that she inherited the books! Nice story telling. I agree, you could make a whole novel out of this idea.
I've always personally felt that the most crucial part of any story is the ending. Love your thinking, and loved the way you wrapped it up.
Thank you for a lovely story with a surprse ending. Parting Gifts, indeed. Keep writing.
Wonderful. What a great take on this topic. Loved the idea of her getting the books. I'm still smiling. So good!
I really enjoyed your excellent story--Congratulations on a well-deserved EC.
I love the ending of this great story. Congrats, Carol. :)
Congratulations on your EC. Great piece, I was with you all the way with your well-written descriptions and details. Good job!
Thoroughly enjoyable read! What a treasure to inherit both the house and the books! Loved your ending.