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This powerful story left me wanting more--and that's was great writing is all about. So glad God put your MC where he needed to be in order to rescue one small boy.
Heartbreaking reality. Well done. I appreciated this and want to know more.

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This is a heartbreaking reminder of things we could and should be drawing our inspiration from. Thank you for the convicting read.
This one was a tear-jerker and a very powerful story. I'm wondering if those who work in ministries to rescue children from human trafficking (or is it trafficing - that doesn't look right either - too lazy to look it up right now - it's past my bedtime Ü) could use this piece in one of their publications.
A sad and touching story giving a glimpse of the many yet unreached people in Asia and other parts of the world. The MC in your story has begun a good work, and this is a good start for a missionary story.