The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/10
You were able to get a lot of story here within your 750 words. You had my attention throughout. Nice work on this!
05/24/10
Wow, lots of story here. Great creativity.
Quite a story, it grabbed my attention from beginning to end. Thank you.
Now THIS is a riveting story! You had me engrossed in this as if it were me and my heart did several flip-flops. WOW, WOW and WOW!