The Official Writing Challenge
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04/23/10
Good job.
If I'm not mistaken I've seen Barbara promoting her "Book of the month."
Thank YOU.
Good story and interaction. I'm not sure why there aren't any quotation marks before or after dialog lines unless it's a cultural difference. Nice job.
04/23/10
The story was so typical of the reading habits of many of my coworkers who claim to be Christians but prefer to read whatever is the latest passing fad in which people try to find themselves in all the wrong places. Thank you for helping us hope.
04/24/10
I love the structure you used for this entry. Not many writers would try doing a story with no description at all. The conversation carried the story perfectly.

Can I borrow the book when she is through with it?
I love the irony in this. There is much promotion of books and stories for th.e sake of 'art'--where someone else tells you what is good. You skillfully illuminated the heart of the problem.