The Official Writing Challenge
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Ah, you reminded me of the simple and powerful call of God--that we are to "Go". Thank you.
Love this one. May believers everywhere obey the Master's call to leave their safe havens and minister to a broken world. Nicely done.
You did such an outstanding job with the conflict. It was palpable. Well done.
Intrigued by your story. Would like to see it as a chapter 1.
Well written.

I found myself wanting to hurry to the finish, trying to guess the "word" as I read.

Powerful message in just that solitary word!

I am literally covered in goosebumps. As much as I tried to keep them from it, my disobedient eyes skipped ahead and read "the word". So the goosebumps rose before I got to the end. This is fabulous - I can feel the fear the residents of Haven must be feeling - I'd rather stay at home and dissect the words myself, rather than GO. I wonder what their reaction was when they heard what the Master's command actually was. Love it.