The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this. It reminds me of Hinds Feet on High Places, one of my favorite books. Yes, it is worth the climb. Thanks for the reminder.
Way to nail the topic!!!!!!! And write a super masterful great story! I love this and plan on reading it again. Great job. God bless.
This IS GREAT! Awesome job starting out with children playing and then going their own way, like in life. You had me snagged for this adventure with: It was exciting and frightening and dark.

I would like to see this story coninute also.
What a beautiful story. I love the victorious (Wow!) moment at the end... that made the journey (climb) so worth it. I also loved your use of the "contant companion" and how, at times, you held on to the hem of his garment. Love this!
A lovely and very effective allegory of the Christian's journey. Well done!
This wonderful allegory almost brought me to tears with its penetrating truth. Really ministered to my heart. Thank you.
Lovely, lovely allegory!