The Official Writing Challenge
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Love your title. It truly is perfect for this story. You did a great job bringing this event from the Bible to life.
You've brought this episode to life with credibility and power. I love how you've described your MC's inner struggle succumbing to the confidence to persist in reaching the Rabbi.
You've infused this with a lot of emotion. Even though I knew how it would end, I got chills when I read your ending. Very nice work!
This is a beautiful story, where you took a story from the bible and told it from an interesting and different point of view. I love your MC's stuggle to speak to Jesus and her faithful determination. Excellent!
I've always admired this woman's faith and persistence, and you effectively helped us see the story through her eyes. Good job.
Awesome title, and what a great out of the box story for this prompt. My only red ink is that there was a lot of "telling" at the beginning. It took me a couple of paragraphs to get into the flow of the story.