The Official Writing Challenge
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So powerful. You did a wonderful job with showing the emotions in all the characters. I love the ending especially.
I appreciated the way you gave this piece a very direct, unadorned style. It suited the setting and story very well.
Wow! was my first thought, then i checked to see if we were doing the "wow" topic yet :)

This was amazing and sad; told in a voice that seemed just a matter of fact-as it was.
You've portrayed the customs of a people exceedingly well, along with the love that binds a mother to her baby.
Congrats on EC!
Heart-breaking but beautifully written. Congrats on your Editor's Choice!
I liked the way you wrote this piece. Your "matter of fact" way of writing intrigued me. Congratulations on your win!