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I liked this. How often we judge others by their outward appearances instead of what's in their hearts. I enjoyed the voice of the pastor and could picture the hippy youth leader so clearly. A creative use of the topic. Thumbs up to you.
Perfect illustration of how we often don't give younger members of the Body enough credit. I like this angle on the topic.
So many things in churches have changed. Some people were upset when guitars and new Christian music appeared in the sanctuaries. Whatever works to draw young people to The Lord is ok in my mind.

Your selection of verse is perfect. I really like your story.