The Official Writing Challenge
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Amazing. Beautiful. Love it!
What a sweet story--and I really liked the bride's voice. Very genuine.
Beautiful story of how God weaves our brokeness in a lovely tapestry.
Goosebumps, chills, and tears. Fabulous.
What a beautiful, well-written tale of love and redemption.
What a beautiful love story. Very emotional and it almost felt I was intruding, the love felt so honest.
every bubble of joy, every drift of fragrance what great descriptions. Love a love story.
Your descriptions are amazing; so detailed I could see everything.

Still have them, excellent!
A beautiful story, tenderly told. Lara-Jane certainly found the perfect soulmate! Well done!
Great dialog and a powerful, well written story.
I love the story! It expresses deep within the feeling of a dream come true despite our inadequacies. , embracing a love that goes beyond mere words or romance. Its like the love of Christ for us and the unsaved even while we were yet sinners, unlovable by normal standards, blemished and unclean. Yes, all of us certainly must learn to accept ourselves just as God accepts us for who we are.

Great imagery! I was able to picture the scenes vividly from your writing.

Congrats, Debbie! This one is awesome!
Beautiful portrait of unconditional love. Just what marriage should me! Congratulations.
Congratulations Debbie! Well done on your 3rd place.
Vividly, shiningly beautiful! Congratulations, well deserved!
This is a beautifully written love story that engaged me from the start. A well deserved win--congratulations. Always look forward to reading your entries.