The Official Writing Challenge
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What a sweet, sweet story. Loved it!
Very sweet, cute story. Grandma was a better woman than me, that's for sure.

I was a little confused with the MC's age. At first I thought she was youngish--around 10. But her reactions to the conversation with Grandpa made me think she was a bit older.

My laugh-out-loud line was "...a cherry-pit-spit away." Great description.
Lovely story - very easy to visualise and a good illustration of "oops".
I love the way in intertwined criss-crossed objects into the story!
Good for Granny! That's how you win a man. :)