The Official Writing Challenge
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This is one of my favorite "Bible oops" stories
told exceptionally well. The minute you think Haman and his gallows and his pride, you think "oops." This writer made the story come alive.
I thought of this story right from the start. You really brought it to life!
An appropriate story for the topic. I felt that you stuck a little too rigidly to the Bible tale so that I always knew what was coming next. But then again that's also a valid form of writing! I enjoyed the line about reading in as boring a voice as possible.
This story fits the topic well, and your retelling of it makes it enjoyable to read.
That's one of my favorite Bible stories. Poetic justice to the max!!! Very well-done retelling.