The Official Writing Challenge
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That one got me..I did not expect the ending. Very good.
You got me. I love it when an author gets me like that. Super job creating a suspenseful mysterious plot, that ends with an eye-rolling groan - in a good way. Very well done. :)
Completely hoodwinked me. Wow! what an imagination. Thanks for sharing this unusual piece.
Yep, got me too! LOVE the creativity, and the skill it took to weave this together so perfectly. Super fun entry...
Clever, witty; great ending! I love your footnote too. Wonderfully written. This is my favorite so far.
Wow! I was sure I was in sci-fi future--had to kick myself for falling for your trick. Wonderful story!
You got us all good, I'd say! Excellent writing! Now I'll be looking for your next one after you throw your brick. Laura
Fun fun fun.Great ending!
Got me! Super creative and superbly written. Well done!
I had an inkling where you were going, don't know why. Even so, you kept me hanging until the end. Good writing.
Oh, I didn't expect that! You planted clues all the way, but I didn't catch on. Very effective, from beginning to end!
All I can say is...WOW! What a super job!! You are an artist!
Iloved it. I was thinking it sounds like a bug spray but that's too far out. But you managed to make a wacky idea believable and I totally loved it!