The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 718 times
Member Comments
The repetition of your title in this poem adds the punch to each point your crafted words are making. Great job.
As I read this, I felt as if I were spiraling down a dark, black hole. I was hoping for light at the end of the tunnel and you did not disappoint. Nice job of showing the cloistering emotions of blackness; and ultimately how to overcome it and not be afraid.
I had wanted to do a positive piece on darkness, but I couldn't come up with an idea! I'm glad you did! I was encouraged by the hope in your wonderful writing and would like (with your permission) to share it with a family member who is going through a black time right now. Thank you!
The title and repeated phrase "embrace the blackness" were extremely effective and creative.