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I love berries, and have picked my share from my own house or neighboring farms. I found this article a little hard to get through, though, with so many facts about berries and farming--I'd love to see a bigger glimpse of the stories among the berries, with dialogue and action to draw me in. But you made me wish it was still summer and I could go pick some berries right now! Good job.
This was berry interesting, berry educational and has now made me berry hungry for fresh berries.
I enjoyed this article. I think, though, that it would have been an even better story if you had gotten to the heart of the story sooner.