The Official Writing Challenge
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Move over, Ray Bradbury; another who creates beautiful prose is among us.
This entry has so many scintillating descriptions. I especially love the personifications of fall, two of my favorites-- "certain to quench autumn's regal thirst" and "to catch the eye of autumn as she passes. The paragraph showing harmonies of birds and animals in the fall was particularly lovely. I guess you can tell I loved this.
09/04/09
Poetry without being poetry in the common sense. Lovely.
09/05/09
So much imagery here--this would be lovely as an illustrated little book--you know, those Hallmark kind of books that make wonderful gifts. I enjoyed this a lot.
09/09/09
Yes, you certainly have salted your poetic prose with beautiful imagery. And BTW, Ray Bradbury has been one of my inspirations since meeting him in Indian Wells, CA back in the late 80s.
09/11/09
Incredible.
Delighted to see this ranked so highly