The Official Writing Challenge
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I was glad to be around when this poor girl's maternal instinct kicked in and glad to know that beneath that sarcasm was actually love for the baby. Very well written.
I like the way that the girl's harsh attitude started to mellow by the end. I suspect however that she could become quite a burden on the adopting parents! Nicely written
This is very good. You really captured the mind of an unwed mother. So many conflicting emotions. Nice writing.
I was concerned that this mother's emotions might change too quickly, leaving the story less believable. That didn't happen though. You did a good job of showing her conflciting emotions and change of heart in a way that was believable to the reader, and you did it in only 750 words. Good job!