The Official Writing Challenge
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Ouch. Had a feeling this would have a sad note to it. Poor Ginger. Some good emotions trapped in here. Good stuff.
I love your characterizations. I could see the sisters and the dad so clearly. I felt real sympathy for your mc. She had too heavy a load for her young shoulders. Excellent writing.
Sadly, so accurate a portrayal that's too common, but the simple prayer at the end brings us to another level. Thank you
Wonderful writing my friend. Well done!
It is very good writing that has the reader visualizing the scene as it is being read. This is what I was doing. I think you did a very good job with your MC and the other characters in the story. They were very believable.
Thank you by the way for your kind words about my entry.