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I love this story. Little Ethan is a character. :) He did end up having a most perfect summer. Good job!
An enjoyable story. I only wish more children these days had adventures like this (instead of hours glued in front of video games).
Two enjoyable stories in one, yours and Ethan's.

I remember those summer vacation essays. Mine were never as eloquent as Master Ehtan's, but thank you for stirring those memories to life once more.

Sweet, sweet writing.
I always hated those after the holiday essays too. Like your character I never went anywhere. I liked his story - apart from the rabbit skinning.
This was fun to read. Bravo to Mrs. Simmons for encouraging Ethan to discover what made his summer so special!
Why do teacher make kids write those essays? I used to feel just like Ethan. Great job with this story!
LOL @ Ethan! The squishably loveable kind of MC. nicely done, had me chuckling through the end! Your title is right, it is a perfect end.