The Official Writing Challenge
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Very interesting concept and very well written.
Mine seem to know when I need comfortingeven when I don't. Uncanny. Nicely done.
Yep, you got me-didn't see the end coming and it really threw me off when the volunteer "jumped down." Very clever, and yes, I've heard similar accounts of animals who sensed death. Very cool.
I was thrown off guard when I realized your MC was not a person--the "jumping down" sentence was my first clue. Grateful for the author's note.
Oh, my, for those of us who love our four legged friends this was, well, dare I say it? "The cat's meow...." Creative, engagine and I enjoyed the read...
A well-written piece that could be used in training sessions in working in older adult ministry.

A very enjoyable read.