The Official Writing Challenge
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Very interesting concept and very well written.
07/10/09
Mine seem to know when I need comforting—even when I don't. Uncanny. Nicely done.
Yep, you got me-didn't see the end coming and it really threw me off when the volunteer "jumped down." Very clever, and yes, I've heard similar accounts of animals who sensed death. Very cool.
07/11/09
I was thrown off guard when I realized your MC was not a person--the "jumping down" sentence was my first clue. Grateful for the author's note.
07/13/09
Oh, my, for those of us who love our four legged friends this was, well, dare I say it? "The cat's meow...." Creative, engagine and I enjoyed the read...
07/13/09
A well-written piece that could be used in training sessions in working in older adult ministry.

A very enjoyable read.