The Official Writing Challenge
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Good inspiration
I was in suspense, waiting to see what the unconventional protrait would be and then thrilled with the result. Great creativity and writing here.
07/10/09
Really good.
07/10/09
Touching and sweet. I really liked this.
A clever portrait of a clever portrait. LOL Well done.
Delightful story and love the mc's voice.
07/12/09
Clever, creative, all this and more. I LOVE this entry!
07/13/09
Lucille's niece definitely chose the right artist... one who could paint a life rather than just a face. Very creative! Well done.
07/14/09
Very nice details encased in a lovely story. Great job!
07/16/09
Congratulations Debbie. This deserved first place! Excellent, beautiful, moving, and so very creative!
A wonderful story. Here was a true artist who saw much more than the outward appearsance, just as our Heavenly Father does. Fantastic. Congratulations.
07/16/09
Oh, my gosh, you made me cry... absolutely loved this ...congratulations on your first place win...well deserved.
Lisa
07/16/09
Goose bumps! I had goose bumps when I reached the end, very good!
07/16/09
Wow! I'm so glad I read this. Totally deserving of the win. Congrats!
07/16/09
I Love Jessica and Lucille. That's what happens when you add wisdom and caring, the portrait is special. Splendid! So worthy.
Mona
07/17/09
Beautiful, absolutely gorgeous. I'm still wiping my eyes.
07/17/09
Exquisite writing. I loved your climax. What a sympathetic and insightful artist
07/18/09
Awesome story written with incredible passion and insight. I really loved this. Congratulations.
Wow hon! This is simply a masterpiece skillfully painted by the Lord through you. I loved this. Such realistic images of old age softened as the eyes of the artist saw her model's heart. Lovely!!Congratulations!!!
Totally believable characters and dialogue. A beautiful story - gentle and inspiring. I was misty eyed by the end. Well done and thank-you.
08/06/09
What a beautiful story
03/18/10
Well Done! I love when the story takes me to that special place. A place where critiquing the writer's skill
no longer exists. Only the fact that my heart has been moved!