The Official Writing Challenge
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Clever writing of this changed fairy tale. Poor Brother Grimm. I think he'll need a long break at Star Bucks the way it is going with complaining princesses. Cute way of showing contentment and expectations in relationships. Goes to show you what we think is going to be a princesses dream is something different once reality faces us. :0))
05/22/09
Utter delight! I'd thought about how to use "happily ever after" in this theme but you did it so well, I'm really glad I didn't even try.
Awe! So clever--one of my favorites this week.
05/24/09
VERY clever, and so fun! Love the title, and the fun plays on words.
05/24/09
Great voice, fun read, wonderful writing ... loved it.
Very funny! And yet, there is much wisdom here too. Love it.
05/25/09
Very witty and highly entertaining. I loved it!
Hilarious - I loved the line about the prince's temper making Grumpy's look tame. So creative!