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Great title - AND I love your MC's voice. Great message too, of course.
Unequal yolks!! Too funny! When I became a Christian, the first church I joined was one where they spoke another language, if you know what I mean. Christian jargon. Made me realize how hard it might be for someone off the street to "get it". So, I became aware of that need.
Your story was terrific.
Your narrator sounds very real and true to life. Great voice! I love the way "Preach" described salvation, and I think your MC did too.
I thought this was extremely funny and very well written- I enjoyed reading it!
Excellent voice and tone. I Like your use of the word "Ping". This was a fun piece to read.
This is great, Gerald! Loved the mc and the dialogue. Fun with a message. Well done.