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You've made Moses sound only too humanlike most of us when God asks us to do something. Hilarious.
I'm still chuckling. With all the "hindsight" featured, this is a delightful look at Moses.
I enjoyed the illustrations you made in this monologue by Moses. Not an easy assignment to carry down the mountain either.Very real.
What a wonderful yet strangely reverent look at Moses the man. You are blessed with a wonderful gift for whimsy.

Such a joyful romp on Mount Sinai.
Excellent title, Gerald!
Quite humorous. Great writing. Well Done!
This is the perfect Biblical story for the topic. It is interesting to wonder what Moses thought when he had to return up the mountain. :) Your alliterative title is great! :)
This made me smile. It's creative and unique. Thumbs up.