The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent writing. Life does have the ups and downs of a roller coaster, and I especially love the prayer at the end.
Your analogies of the roller coaster illustrate excellently the ups and downs the Christian experiences. I, too, loved the ending prayer.
Wow, your example is very effective, and it takes masterful writing to pull it off in this way. Amen!
It's great to know we will end up on the hilltop of Jesus no matter the downs of life. I like the double entendre of the line "I thought I'd be left in mid-air as the car plummeted" as a metaphor for life's rollercoster ride.
Wonderful entry that I could definitely see in a devotional book reminding us all about life's up and downs.