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Very good! I can see this one in a Sunday School paper or a children's book.
I love Mr. Wrinkles! This was a great way to explain to a child. I am so grateful God gives us creativity to share those things.
This was a wonderful way to explain this parable to a child and a wonderful way to lead a child to salvation. The pictures for this would be adorable.
Great explanation on a child's level. A delightful story that would be great for children.
A wonderful parallel to the original parable. I agree ... this has a charming children's book written all over it.
I liked the comparison to Mr. Wrinkles also! My kids have special stuffed animals so they would be able to understand this. Nice perspective!
Lovely story! I can also see this as a sweet little story for children in Sunday school. Mandy could relate and it has a clear plan of salvation, too.
I can see the marketing, too--the book bundled with an actual Mr. Wrinkles. What fun! (I'd buy one.)
Nice modern take on the biblical parable. Children would really be able to grasp this. Nice job!
Very sweet little story! I liked the way that you explained the kingdom of God on a child's level. THey are what the kingdom of God is about, right? :) One little thing that you probably already have noticed..."things have changes."
So important that we reach children for Jesus.
There are so many who know nothing about scripture and we must work to make sure they get it. Good story, with important message.
I'm in agreement with those who think this would be a good children's book. Actually, I think it would make a cute skit.

You did a good job explaining salvation on a child's level. Nicely done.