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You pictured well with words a modernization of the parable of the rich man.
Love this modernization. I could picture this man so clearly, and the end was certainly a surprise. Great descriptions.
Excellent updated parable--I enjoyed this very much.
Great re-telling of this Bible story. Your dialogue and descriptive phrases are very good. Excellent job with the topic.
Wow! I agree that this re-telling is delightful to read, and yes, I'm glad for the happy ending, too. I pray many a rich man has also changed the ending in their own lives to this happy one. ( :
Great modern take on the biblical account! Very well done!
Well done! It was interesting to see this parable put into a modern light. Sometimes the words/stories Jesus spoke can seem too familiar. Thanks for making it real again!
Always working to put away childish things. Some lesons are tough. But, God's blessings and open arms to welcome us when we finally GET IT.
Good Story.


I found this to be a most enjoyable read with a delightful, intriguing premise.

Well done.
I really liked your title and re-telling of this Biblical parable. I could feel the sunken heart of Daniel as he walked along lost and confused. Great story and an even greater lesson.