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I am appalled. Excellent story, but so sad.
A horrifying story but one that sounds all too authentic. Would to God that such tragedies were not as common as they sadly are!
So heartbreaking. You brought across the terrible angst in that poor girl's heart so clearly. Wow.
What a heartbreaking condition for a woman to endure.I especially liked the description in your second paragraph.
Bitter and ugly. It is so hard to even think about. Leaves the reader in pain for the victims and helpless.
This is so sad! To think this is a life they have been indoctinated to believe is right. Father forgive them, they do not know what they do, is my cry.
I'm amazed at the way you can capture the reader with the story of this girl's life with such few words. It definitely is a terrible tragedy that this happens. May they find God's grace in the midst of their suffering.