The Official Writing Challenge
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This was excellent. I was on the edge of my seat wondering what was going to happen. The ending was a nice surprise! Yeah!
Wow, a terrific look behind the scenes at history. Well done.
Oh wow! So vivid and such a terrible event in history. I was right there.
Superb, edge-of-your-seat, writing! Captivating and terrifying. Great job.
Excellent! I've never tried to write in this genre...but you've nailed it, my friend! Action, suspense, and loads of corozon. Top notch!
Great story. Powerful and vivid.
Such a bold bit of writing.
Really fantastic!

It is so hard to read that last paragraph {endnote} about Henry Kissinger. Uggg.

Nitpicky. In my opinion, the word bowel is the wrong choice. You were just talking about MC being stripped and so I was thinking human belly and not plane belly. :)
So that threw me off a teeny.

However, the next sentence is so perfect that I was right on track and IN IT again.

Great job!
Excellent writing. Kept me to the end and wanted more!
Wow! What a wonderful job with suspense. You're a truly gifted writer.
This is a very well-written piece. I was engaged the whole time. I also liked learning about this time in history.
This is exceptional. Wow.
Excellent suspense writing! You have a very talented way of drawing the reader into the story.