The Official Writing Challenge
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Great perspective—if only suitcases could talk (Or maybe it's better if they didn't, though I'm glad yours did!). Very good.
WOW... this was super creative! I did get a little confused at the end as I thought it was a car talking. Great writing!
Hehe - cute and clever. Got a bit confused to start, but caught on after a bit.
Funny. Clever and creative angle on the topic.
Fun little guessing game had me guessing for a few minutes. Had to go back and start over from the 3rd paragraph before I got it. I'm still laughing at the image of a duffle bag flirting with a little that what they mean by "carry-on" luggage?
Cute story. Like some of the other commenters, it took me a while to figure out "who" was talking. Fun way to use the topic!
Fun perspective and creative way to cover the topic. Good job!
Your entry made me smile...and very glad my suitcase can't talk! I noticed that even your suitcase had a "slip of the tongue"...or is that strap? :-)In any case, it's good to be reminded that missions isn't about our comfort!