The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/09
Oh, very good. It took me a bit to realize when this was but when I did, it really hit me. Great job building emotion.
02/03/09
Very real emotion here, and a camaraderie that was made very clear in the narrative. Beautiful.
Your story really brings to life the fear and horror caused by "misdirected loyalties."
02/04/09
This brought back long forgotten feelings of the comeraderie felt after those attacks.