The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/09
I love the ending—she was soooo worried they would give her a hard time! The dialogue was great.
01/22/09
Nothing else to be said, except this was brilliant.
I enjoyed this wonderful story for the humor, the family love, and the excellent writing.
01/25/09
Wonderful dialogue, and I really like the relationships here.

FYI: The word "wherefore" really means "why" rather than "where". When Juliet says "Wherefore art thou Romeo?", she asing why he has that name, not where he is.

The ending? Awesome!
01/25/09
I rather liked the story, although I felt bad for the girl's anguish over how her grandparents would feel. I'm glad it turned out so well.
I like the love story and the hard of hearing grandfather in this. I wasn't sure how it was going to end, but I'm glad that the grandparents approved. :)
01/26/09
Awww....what a sweet story. Well done!
01/29/09
I enjoyed reading your story and loved the hard-of-hearing grandfather! CONGRATULATIONS on your EC! :)