The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/08
How wonderful is the postman who prays over the mail and for each envelope! I'm not a POV expert, it seems that since this is told in first person, the actions of the postman wouldn't be known. And from the ending, it seems the MC isn't familiar with the Bible? It was a bit confusing. But the writing is great, the character of the postman was well done, and as I said, I love your idea.
11/14/08
Love how you set the scene, especially in the beginning. I found the POV shift a bit distracting, but the story was lovely.
Great idea for the topic. As already stated, the POV could use tweaking in this charming tale.