The Official Writing Challenge
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A great analogy to church life and how silly it is to feel safe when we are doing nothing of what Christ told us to. A good piece of writing.
Great detail, and what an awesome witness he is, and what a great message for all of us.
Great message pointing to the purpose we are here--to spread His word and to shine our lights for Him--even when it's risky.
A well written creative take on the topic, with a true message that needs to be heard. Great job.
This is a unique slant on the topic, and the story is gripping! I noted a couple of shifts in tense. Other than that, a very strong piece.
Great take on the topic and well-written. Obvious reason why you are a Master!