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This is WONderful. Your last line is perfect: "I cant help but smile, a smile that reaches all the way down to my stomach."
This was a neat story to show cultural differences. Very good.
I love the title - perfect for this piece. You did a wonderful job of showing ALL the contrasts in this piece. Nicely done!
Everything here sounds so authentic. And not a turkey or goose in sight! A refreshing read.
Your title leads into an engrossing story. I loved the sensitivity of the mother-in-law.
I really enjoyed this. I was however confused if Wale and Tundre were the same person. Great insights into an inter-racial inter-cultural family.
I really enjoyed the way in which you contrasted the two completely different cultures against each other. 'Midnight sun' was meant to be 'Midnight sky?'