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10/23/08
w, this is such a sweet story, but it packs a powerful punch in message. My eyes were burning at the end. I do think the word "bath" should be "bathe," though. Teeny tiny. Well done!
10/24/08
I loved this story--it choked me up because this spirt of giving is what Christmas is all about. Sadly too often it has been replaced with greed. Thank you for the sweet message of love and faithfulness to God's will.
10/25/08
Great story. I liked the message and title.
10/26/08
I have chills now. Sure sign of a great Christmas story:)
10/27/08
Wonderful characterization, and an incredible story of what Christmas is truly about. Love the ending too.
10/27/08
I loved the growing sense of anticipation that carried this tale to a warm and affirming conclusion
Cookie seeds...you're so creative! I love the idea and the way it played out in the story.
10/27/08
Absolutely wonderful! The characters sparkle and I loved as they giggled and tiptoed down the road. Great lesson wrapped up in this!
I loved the story on many levels, including the wonderful message, but I was truly drawn in by the loving relationship between the mother and daughter.
10/27/08
What a beautiful message mixed together in cookie dough. I really enjoyed this one.
I enjoyed this story of giving and blessings. Great title. Wonderful imagery.
I loved the mom tossing the apron across the kitchen. That visual helped to set up the playful relationship of the mom and daughter. Wonderful story and message.
10/28/08
Touching tale with a powerful message. The title fit perfectly. Nice job!
10/29/08
I love your title for this creative, heart-warming story. Excellent writing!
The title was great, the beginning and the middle moving, and the ending certainly did not disappoint. Wonderful story Deb.
10/30/08
I love the message in this story - it's a perfect story for Christmas! Excellent work!
I agree that this story reflects the giving spirit of Christmas extremely well, and it is well written. Of course that's to be expected coming from you, Debbie. :)