The Official Writing Challenge
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I wish we could use emoticons VERY, very funny!
Oh boy! How funny! Poor kitty is in for it!
Hee, me! I love the name of the cat.
You got me too! Great little hints, and definitely a fun piece.
The last two lines are so funny. I could picture that cat proudly walking away. I don't know how, but I guessed early on that it was a cat's POV. I think it was because of the ornaments coming off the bottom first. Still, very funny.
I was getting all sentimental for the mother undressing her tree and treasuring her ornaments, Then came your twist...very clever and funny, too!
Well done! I laughed when I realised who was taking down the Christmas tree. I really like this one.
I knew it was a cat from the line about the red squishy one "near the floor". But it didn't take away from the delightful flow of your poem.
Congratulations on your EC. I was glad to see it was so funny.
Congratulations, Lynda! Your spontaneity on Thrusday morning paid off!
Congratulations, Lynda! I just love this 'cute as a kitten' poem! :) I read it the first day of posting and chuckled all day long thinking about it. My comment is late but wanted to tell you how much I love this little mean tale! heehee!