The Official Writing Challenge
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Oooh, caught me by surprise! Good job!
I read this entry yesterday, but I think it left me too forlorn to comment. (That's a praise - your excellent writing made a strong impact.) Christmas isn't a joyous time for everyone, and you've expressed that very well through your MC. I like ending with a note of hope and wonderment - even when we are all alone in our sorrow, we are never really alone.
The ending of your entry gave me chills. You kept my attention from beginning to end on this piece. Well done my faithwriter friend.
What somber story, with a hope filled ending. Very nice...
I loved the beautiful ending to this oh-so-sad story-very well written to grab the reader's heart and hold on.
Goose bumps - thank you!