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Good story & well-written, but I'm not sure how it fits into the topic!
Very engaging and real. The emotions were so authentic. I was wrapped up in this. Nicely done
Nice story. The emotional tug of war came through in your writing. Good job.
Oh,I have to say I LOVE this. This is my kind of story, for sure. I so want Charlie to fall for a hunk and he loves her totally! It might not be really strong on the topic, but it's GREAT, GREAT, GREAT writing!!! (And I'm NOT just saying that!)
I thought this was solid, realistic writing. I was enthralled with the conversation, and wanted to slap the man when the redhead walked by! Good job!
Congratulations! Loved this story. Awesome writing -- as always:)
Ahhhh...poor Charlie! I wanted to shake Paul and tell him to run after her! Good emotional descriptions!
Wow! Tremendous storyI had to cheer for Charlie's courage to walk away. I'm always amazed at the smooth flow of your writing. Always Wow!
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