The Official Writing Challenge
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Ouch! What a twist. Well done.
Ouch! Would not want to be in her shoes! Excellent writing....pulled me right into the story.
Ooooh my. Did NOT see that twist coming. Very engaging read from the first word to the last!
What is very sad about this entry, is that this is real life.
This is a powerful story. I think you have wonderful knack for creating an effective plot. Your message always comes through loud and clear without belaboring the point.
Very well done. I didn't see the twist coming at the end and it made the point about truth very effectively!
Wow, what a twist at the end. Very good story and had me intrigued all the way to the end!
Ooooh, good one! My only suggestion: a more intriguing title. Really good job of focusing the reader on Sam's lie, and whalloping us with the real truth.
Congratulations on your EC. The ending really caught me. Very good writing, and excellent job with the topic.
So suspenseful - I just had to know what the Dad knew, but I really didn't expect it to be THAT! Great inner conflict & monologue from the MC. Well done & congratualtions!