The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 1498 times
Member Comments
I could just feel that slap of the water, the reality of it all was great. I would have liked one more line about the ravens though but thats just me. great piece thanks for sharring.
I loved this one! Great writing....I love the dramatic inner thoughts with a bit of hyperbole.
You did a wonderful job, especially, with her thoughts. Sounded so realistic! Nicely done. Love the last line, too.
I loved this! I'm so scared of heights and water that you had me literally on the edge of my seat waiting for the outcome :) Great writing!
I LOVE your title! and I can't believe that you jumped ! :) impressive! ouch to the bruise and I also love your ending dare (pun intended) :) You've got tons of fun (hyperbole intended) in this!
Wonderful, wonderful voice. Love the bits with the ravens--and the awesome hyperbole. Love this entry!
This is excellent. It's well written and entertaining, too. Great title. Kudos.
Just reading the description of going under the water gave me claustrophobia! No. Way. Not me. Never!
The nice thing about being a reader is wimpy me gets to live vicariously through the characters in the stories! Love the "experience" of jumping off a cliff into deep water that you gave me in this one. ( :
(Please say this is not a first-hand account!)